English Native: Please edit / correct this letter?
I order a French school in France. I sent the application fee school and the need to send the registration form and photos. I send this letter and the letter should not have any English error. Thank you very much for your help! Dear, I am applying for the program during a semester IEFE (IEFE is the name of school) in January 2010-May 2010. Please, we welcome the enclosed registration form and 3 photographs passport. I also sent the deposit of the fees (400 euros) bank transfer. Sorry for writing this letter in English. I am a beginner in French, but the hope of being able to write in French that one day soon. Sincerely, (OR.?) Chris Newman,
Dear Sir / Madam, I am applying for the program IEFE half of January 2010 to May 2010. Attached is the registration form and 3 passport photos. I sent the deposit for tuition fees (400 euros) bank transfer. apologies for writing this letter in English. I am a beginner in French, but hopefully soon I to be able to write in French. Yours sincerely (or in kind, at a glance) Chris Newman
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